Good plot, good plot, now what?

Hm... it's good. I like it, but it all seems a bit rushed. I love romance novels and movies and whatnot, but I'm all about making it seem like real life. You'd have to convince me that they really did bond that fast. Otherwise, I think it's great. However, you do need a twist, you can't just end it. Maybe the storms come and they get separated? She thinks he's dead? Although, she'd have to care a whole lot to make that interesting.